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Re: THE PALEO BREED (Poem)



Darren Tanke wrote:
> the Grande Prairie schedule- not for the meek. [PACHYRHINOSAURUS BB with
> Hans Larsson]
<Snip>
> they always ask "Is that a REAL dinosaur bone?" [My least favorite tourist
> query].
<snip>
> from everyone else of the human races. [People taking our pictures in the
> prep lab]


My critiques:
#1) these particular lines don't rhyme.  they don't even fit the metre! 
;]

#2)  Don't you have to also do this in French, being Canadian and all?

-Betty